wildness under the skin…
Poets’ Pub prompt from https://dversepoets.com/
- today’s prompt suggested a beautiful title for the poem I submitted yesterday; so I hope nobody feels I am cheating by re-submiting:
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… There is a wildness under the skin…
anticipation is it
of the cold to enter my skin
as I sit in the central-heated room
for days now
or of success my life’s work might finally see
or failure for that matter?
today I have let her music fill the room
and I know:
it’s anticipation of more warmth
has me shiver
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Ha… yes it fits well again
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said this on January 25, 2022 at 20:22 |
A great addition to the poem, Barbara: it really sets the mood!
Ingrid said this on January 25, 2022 at 20:31 |
thank you – sounds like I might be forgiven plagiarising 😀
Barbara S said this on January 25, 2022 at 20:33 |
Yes, it is fitting!
Linda Lee Lyberg said this on January 25, 2022 at 20:35 |
Anticipation for me – a feeling of wildness, of uncontrollable longing or fear.
Stine Writing said this on January 25, 2022 at 22:07 |
*applause*
ben Alexander said this on January 26, 2022 at 09:47 |
(blushing) ☺
Barbara S said this on January 26, 2022 at 10:28 |
Both prompts fitted well. Nice. Happens.
Much love
Gillena Cox said this on January 26, 2022 at 16:24 |
My goodness this is gorgeous! 💝💝
sanaarizvi said this on January 26, 2022 at 21:11 |
blushes ☺
Barbara S said this on January 27, 2022 at 01:07 |
I thoroughly enjoyed this Barbara.
Helen Dehner said this on January 27, 2022 at 16:26 |