hopeless case?

am given a silver thread to weave

now called tinsel only at winter solstice* –

my riches from, to tell a story of truth

that makes people see: when you see, you can only act:

always a hopeless case?

weaving not my worst

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*https://dversepoets.com/2021/12/13/quadrille-142/

~ by Barbara S on December 13, 2021.

14 Responses to “hopeless case?”

  1. Ooh, nice one!

  2. thank you πŸ™‚

  3. …”to tell a story of truth” is all anyone can ask. Not easy to do sometimes.

  4. A powerful image, weaving truth from a single strand.

  5. Love the image of a silver thread to weave “a story of truth.”
    Pax,
    Dora

  6. weaving a story of truth is the best thing we can do.

  7. isn’t it interesting what genuine comments can reveal to the writer about their work…

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